I watched your pitch on the thread that the professor made, I was very interested and thought I could offer some ideas. While you presented a very common problem, I think that the coffee bike idea may make it difficult to deliver to all of the consumers that have the need. If you can summarize how the service operates to fill the need of all or most consumers during the time, you would have an even better pitch. Ask yourself what concerns could arise from the consumer and address them if you can during small time you have. For example, maybe answer the question- "what if there is a wait time to this service as well?". I think your pitch was awesome and I just wanted to relay some ideas to you! Great job!
I really liked your enthusiasm towards your idea for new coffee shops on campus. You seemed like you were really passionate about your idea, and you looked polished with a good volume of voice. I'd definitely support your product if I was an investor!
Carson, your elevator pitch was very passionate and I think that you made it very memorable. You also used statistics to back up the points you were trying to prove which was really great. As far as things to improve on, I think a better ending might help. Instead of saying that you hope they like what you have to say, it could be helpful to suggest the next step, like an interview or giving them contact information. Overall great job!
As stated previously, I am also pursuing a coffee endeavor - I really enjoyed the different selling points you incorporated. It made me reflect on what I had said and how I can better improve my pitch.
You were very enthusiastic - I loved how you took pauses and breaks in-between your breaths to emphasize your selling points and engage the audience.
Hi Carson, Great job with your elevator pitch. You can truly see your passion for the idea come out in the way that you speak on it. I also liked how animated you were with hand motions and your facial expressions. You also definitely highlighted all the reasons why your idea would be very beneficial for students at this campus in your opening. If I was an investor/ a potential client, I would definitely be interested in speaking with you further about this idea after your pitch!
Hey Cason!
ReplyDeleteI watched your pitch on the thread that the professor made, I was very interested and thought I could offer some ideas.
While you presented a very common problem, I think that the coffee bike idea may make it difficult to deliver to all of the consumers that have the need. If you can summarize how the service operates to fill the need of all or most consumers during the time, you would have an even better pitch.
Ask yourself what concerns could arise from the consumer and address them if you can during small time you have. For example, maybe answer the question- "what if there is a wait time to this service as well?".
I think your pitch was awesome and I just wanted to relay some ideas to you! Great job!
Hi Cason,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your enthusiasm towards your idea for new coffee shops on campus. You seemed like you were really passionate about your idea, and you looked polished with a good volume of voice. I'd definitely support your product if I was an investor!
Carson, your elevator pitch was very passionate and I think that you made it very memorable. You also used statistics to back up the points you were trying to prove which was really great. As far as things to improve on, I think a better ending might help. Instead of saying that you hope they like what you have to say, it could be helpful to suggest the next step, like an interview or giving them contact information. Overall great job!
ReplyDeleteHello Cason!
ReplyDeleteAs stated previously, I am also pursuing a coffee endeavor - I really enjoyed the different selling points you incorporated. It made me reflect on what I had said and how I can better improve my pitch.
You were very enthusiastic - I loved how you took pauses and breaks in-between your breaths to emphasize your selling points and engage the audience.
Great job!
Caitlyn Torres
Hi Carson,
ReplyDeleteGreat job with your elevator pitch. You can truly see your passion for the idea come out in the way that you speak on it. I also liked how animated you were with hand motions and your facial expressions. You also definitely highlighted all the reasons why your idea would be very beneficial for students at this campus in your opening. If I was an investor/ a potential client, I would definitely be interested in speaking with you further about this idea after your pitch!